Feb 112013

A month I’ve been doing this. Has it gotten better? Well. It’s gotten CONSISTENT, making the same kinds of mistakes over and over, so there’s a nice predictable pattern. Part III (p. 151) begins: A central theme in our argument is that human sexual behavior is a reflection of both evolved tendencies and social context. [...]

Feb 042013

4 sentences into this section, on p. 101, we already find an important mistake. “De Waal’s research had demonstrated, for example, that the increased sexual receptivity of the female bonobo dramatically reduces conflict, when compared with other primates whose females are significantly less sexually available.” It is the exceptional sexual PROCEPTIVITY of the females that [...]